森リンの英語対応版

 当装置(森リン)の自動採点の原理が、どの言語にも適用できることを示すために、次の点の改良を加え、英文の採点を試みました。
1、日本語では、評価する字数の上限を1200字としていたが、英語ではその3倍の3600字としました。
2、平凡語彙は、日本語の平凡語彙をもとに、「and, there, you」などを抽出し、それ以外の語彙をユニーク語彙(素材語彙)としました。
3、思考語彙(強力語彙)は、日本語の思考語彙をもとに、「but, think, therefore」などを抽出しました。
4、日本語における2文字以上の漢語(重量語彙)は、英語の場合はその3倍の、6文字以上の単語としました。

 以上の改良ののちに、米国の自動採点ソフトe-raterが行っているものと同じサンプルを独自に評価しました。
 評価の結果は、下記のとおりです。
 ABCDEFG
総合得点7672134598411370
思考語彙63717462586861
重量語彙(漢語)8171131629911462
ユニーク語彙8073127578611474
 この表をグラフにした結果を見ると、e-raterの採点結果とほぼ同じ形にグラフになっていることがわかります。

 下記は、一つの例として、上記A〜Gの小論文のうちBの小論文を採点をしたときのイメージです。
森アウト
総合 72 点 (可能性 143 点)
可能性の点数は、字数が3600字で、強力・重量・素材のバランスが同じだった場合の点数。
字数 81 点 1136 字
000000000000000000000000000000000000
000000010020020030040040050060060070080080090100100110
000680360040720400080760440120800480160840520200880560
 強力語彙 71 点  12 個
00000000000000000000000000000000
000300600900120150180210240270300330360390420450
重量語彙 71 点  32 種
00000000000000000000000000000000
0007001402102803504204905606307007708409109801050
 素材語彙 73 点  91 種
0000000000000000000000000000000000
000010020030040060070080090100120130140150160180190
000020040060080000020040060080000020040060080000020

 

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円型は各点数の大きさ。平均は全学年平均。 山型の薄い虹色の高さは強力語彙の点数、濃い虹色は重量語彙の点数、底辺は素材語彙の点数。

【本文】
Many people are different because they are raised however their parents want to, but in my occation my parents raised me to respect other’s especially your elders. This experience I had had to do with and old lady, she wanted to cross the street but she could not get down to the street because the concrete was to thick and she could not step down.

She had some trouble, especially since she was carring her big bag that old people carry, I looked at some people that past right by her and didn’t even pay attention to her and since I was there I decided to help her even though I didn’t want to, but I felt that I should because that was the way I was raised.

So I went up to her and asked her if she needed some help, she said yes, took her hand to help her down and walked her across the street after all doing this felt good even though I didn’t want but I did. In that occasion, I know that many people should of done it but they didn’t want to, why because probably they didn’t care, but in my opinion people have to do what the feel they should do not want they want to do because if they did the world would be much different.

強力語彙
because because because because have to because but but but but
but but

素材語彙
12 her9 she6 to6 people5 because5 didn’t5 to,3 had3 do3
street3 even3 should3 raised2 parents2 in2 especially2 and2 could2 since2
was2 though2 felt2 if2 but2 want2 Many1 different1 are1 however1
their1 occation1 me1 respect1 other’s1 elders.1 experience1 lady,1 wanted1 cross1
get1 concrete1 thick1 step1 down.1 She1 trouble,1 carring1 bag1 old1
carry,1 looked1 at1 past1 by1 pay1 attention1 decided1 way1 raised.1
So1 up1 asked1 needed1 help,1 said1 yes,1 hand1 walked1 across1
after1 all1 doing1 did.1 In1 occasion,1 know1 that1 of1 it1
why1 probably1 care,1 opinion1 the1 feel1 did1 world1 would1 be1
different.1

重量語彙
people5 because5 didn’t5 street3 should3 raised2 parents2 especially2 though2 different1
however1 occation1 respect1 other’s1 elders.1 experience1 wanted1 concrete1 trouble,1 carring1
carry,1 looked1 attention1 decided1 raised.1 needed1 walked1 across1 occasion,1 probably1
opinion1 different.1